Brutus

[Calico]

Name: Brutus
Desired Name: 
Age: 11 moons
Rank: Apprentice
Allegiance: Kittypet
Birth Moon: Hunter's Moon 2015
Gender: Tom

Appearance: His Russian Blue heritage makes his coat thick and short. His pelt is a vivid shade of blue-grey. Brutus' daunting eyes are a shade of gentle green. He's average built and is quick on his paws. He has a small black nose.

Personality: He's very active - running around, pouncing, leaping, chasing, and so on. His confident, frisky personality has gotten him into trouble with his twolegs, often stretching and clawing whenever he wants down. Brutus doesn't like to be held and isn't a lap cat. He loves learning new things and watching outside his window. His natural curiosity makes him a avid explore. On the first day Brutus came home he explored every nook and cranny of his new home. He wishes to see the world beyond his window on day.

History: Brutus hasn't really spend much time on earth to have a history. He was born to a Russian Blue queen and had three other siblings. He was loved, but always told this wouldn't be his home. He was the most playful kit of the litter and the first to open his eyes. One day a twoleg couple pick him up and brought him to his new home. While being transported to his new home, the outside air filled with new scents and sights aroused his curiosity and the need to explore. He's been waiting by the the door for his chance to slip out.

[Danielle]

Just a couple minor things in this bio need to to be fixed, otherwise it looks good!

The first thing is that, while cats can be adopted out to homes and separated from their mothers when they're about 12 weeks old, in the warriors world any cat under 6 moons is still considered a kit. Therefore the youngest he could be is 6 moons old since we don't allow for the creation of kits. Just adjust that, along with his birth moon, and you're good.
Although, since the moon switch is coming up soon, there'll be a site-wide age up for all characters. If you want him to be 6 moons old for some time, we can just say that he was created during the Worm Moon rather than the Snow Moon and have him be 6 moons old as of that time, keeping the same birth moon he has now. I may have explained that badly, so let me know if you need me to clear it up a bit, and you can decide what you want to do with him. ^^
One other thing, regarding his appearance. Unless part of a cat's fur is white, it is genetically impossible for them to have blue eyes unless they're under 40 days old, before the true pigment is shown. Russian Blues don't have any white fur on their bodies, so their eyes are usually green or hazel.

And that's it! Fix those up and I'll give it another check over as soon as I can.

[Calico]

I made some changes, is it better now? 

I had no idea they needed white in their fur to have blue eyes, kinda neat.

[Danielle]

Everything seems to be in order, so it's approved! I'll add him to the census and everything and you can start posting with him ^^

Yeah, it's pretty interesting. It has to do with the fact that the white causes a lack of pigment in other parts of the body rather than just in the fur, like paw pads and noses and of course eyes. The more white there is on the body, the higher the chance of the cat having blue eyes. I might actually make some simple genetics guides in the future, once cats start getting genotyped and everything, though it'll be a while until that happens.