Smog [Complete]

[Zesha]

Name:

Desired Name:

Age:

Gender:

Birth Moon:

Allegiance:

Rank:

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Appearance:

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Personality:

History:

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Fun Facts:

• Smog's name pays homage to where he was born, the big city. If he gets the warrior name Smokecloud, that will also be a nod towards his old home.
• I accidentally wrote that lamb's ear reminds Smog of his mother in character, but that's actually a trait for Rosemont.
• Smog looks similar to a cat I used to have.

Social:

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Father: Unnamed Stray
Sibling(s): Unnamed Kittypets
Mate(s): None
Kit(s): None
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[Danielle]

Seems you've gotten the birth moon mixed up somehow, it's a couple moons off. If he's 7 moons old, he would be born in the Sturgeon Moon, 2014.

Also, due to the way white spotting works in cats, it would be impossible for him to have a white spot on his leg without there being some on that paw too. He can still have gray on his paw, but there won't be as much and it would be mainly white. Alternatively, you can get rid of the white altogether and just have that paw be gray. It's up to you. ^^

This last point isn't a request for change, just making sure you know what you're getting into.

"He feels it's his duty to protect his friends, and he will remain by their side until the end."

Keep in mind that should his friends be endangered, you'll have to follow through on that and have him potentially get injured himself. As long as you're okay with that, there's no need to change it. ^^

[Zesha]

Miscounted on the moons, sorry!

Changed his leg and paw to being white. I need to find a good genetics site so I can read up on how fur genetics work.

I have no problem with him getting injured. (: Scars build character.

[Danielle]

No worries! It happens to everyone. In that case, he's accepted and you can start posting whenever you like! I'll add him to the census and allegiances. ^^

If you're looking for genetics guides, I find this one pretty helpful, as well as this one. I'm probably going to do some of my own guides in the near future as well, so people can understand how I do genetics on this site. Everyone writes it slightly differently.