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Post by Fox on Aug 5, 2016 15:58:26 GMT
LUCK Name: LuckDesired Name: Luckyheart or FawnstepAge: 21 MoonsRank: Allegiance: KittypetBirth Moon: The Cold Moon - 2014Gender: QueenAppearance: Having been the runt of the litter, Luck is a somewhat small she-cat, only somewhat smaller than an average-sized femme. She is more built for speed, agility, and balance than strength and intimidation, having long legs and a long tail rather than muscle. Her entire coat is short in length and has a very unique pattern to it. The main color could be either white, light brown, or regular brown, but which color is "main" is up to the cats who care. But a large portion of her fur is white, including her chest, neck, stomach, lower-legs, and splashes of it on her torso and face. All over her body are dapples and even more splashes of many shades of brown, ranging from nearly white up to nearly black. More of the lighter shades are on her torso and tail while the darker shades are on her legs, tail tip, and face. She has nearly black ears, a coal black nose, and deep blue eyes that resemble the ocean or a shining blue jewel.Personality: Honest Luck was raised to be honest and speak her mind. When she has a thought about someone or something, she will say it, but normally holds back if that thought would offend or hurt those around her. At times she can't control her honestly, which leads to the occasional insult or snap coming from her. She likes trying to help others with her thoughts and honest opinions, even if those around her don't care about her input. She isn't one for keeping secrets, but if she does, she acts as though she doesn't even know it so that if another cat asks, she is being honest when she says she doesn't know. Adventurous Since Luck was "protected" from the outside world and many things that other adult cats love, she was always encouraged to stick to what she knows and not go anywhere she doesn't. But being told not to adventure just caused her to be adventurous. She loves exploring new places and taking in new scents, just like a kit would. She likes learning new things about the world around her and seeing new areas, as well as occasionally meeting new cats. Sometimes her adventuring has the potential of getting her in trouble, but she doesn't think about that and would rather test her luck and have fun. Sympathetic Because of how she was treated when she was younger and being around others for so long, she has become a very sympathetic cat, feeling bad for others when they are down, sick, or hurt. She likes helping others in any way that she can, even though at times her helping methods are useless for someone who is sick or hurt. Also, since she was never allowed to actually hunt for herself, she doesn't instantly see animals such as mice and rabbits as food, but more like animals that are just lower and weaker than cats. She knows how to hunt, but she would most likely go for a hurt animal, even though she feels bad for them. She wouldn't want them to be in pain or suffer any longer, which is the only reason she would kill a hurt or sick animal. Unforgiving As sympathetic as she is, she does hold grudges, just as anyone else might. If someone does something or says something to her that offended her, made her angry, or hurt her, she will hold it against them until they prove they are worth her time and effort. She tends to ignore or avoid cats that she has grudges against. Immature Even when she was younger Luck was always the innocent sort. She doesn't really understand crushes or mates or love interests or anything like that. Also with the immaturity comes slight stubbornness and the hesitation to take advice or help from others when she really needs it. She tends to not listen to warnings or threats, for she doesn't really understand them.History: Two cats, a pure white, beautiful she-cat by the name of Lola and a handsome gray tabby tom by the name of Charles, had been put together by their twoleg owners. The twolegs were breeders, breeding good-looking cats and selling the babies, always keeping at least one kitten to pass on the bloodline. Lola and Charles weren't officially mates, but they knew what their twolegs wanted, and that was what they gave them. Three kittens were born, but where they were born was unknown. The twolegs always allowed Lola and Charles to go outside in their fenced yard, for the cats knew where their home was and never left the fence, as far as the twolegs knew. It had been December when the kits were born, which meant snow was on the ground and it was always cold. Previously having a dog, there was a dog house outside on the twolegs' porch, which was where they discovered the kits had been born. At first there were only three, and those three were instantly taken inside to get out of the cold. Lola was going to follow, but she stayed in the dog house for a moment before getting up and walking out, meowing at the door and not coming inside. One of the twolegs followed her back to the dog house, finding one last, very small kitten in the bed. It was clear that this kitten was very weak, which led them to learn the kitten had gotten hypothermia from the harsh cold. The kitten was taken inside and while Lola cared for the other three kittens, the twolegs tried to save the runt. After they had done as much as they could, they thought that the kitten was dead. So they set the kitten next to Lola and hoped for a miracle. While the twolegs weren't looking, Lola kept constantly licking the kit, pulling it closer to her to try and warm it up. Thankfully, the kit did come back and did live, begging for more warmth and food with little mews. From then on, the runt of the litter was named Luck, for that was what she had. Her mother always tried teaching her not to overwork herself or get herself hurt or get in any danger, but clearly that didn't work.
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Post by Danielle on Aug 7, 2016 5:15:45 GMT
This character sheet looks great! I'm excited to see how you play her in character, though first there are a couple of things I'd like to go over.
First, her birth moon is off by a bit. If she's 21 moons old, she'd be born in the Harvest Moon 2013. You mentioned in her history that she was born in December, so if you'd like to keep that a part of her story then you could also change her age if you'd prefer. If she were born in the Cold Moon 2014, she'd be 6 moons old, and if she were born in the Cold Moon 2013 she would be 18 moons old. You could also go with the Beaver Moon or Wolf Moon since they usually have a few dates in December as well, but it's up to you. You can adjust her age and birth moon however you'd like as long as they match up accordingly ^^
In her personality, you mentioned she was sympathetic to the point of feeling bad for prey. This is somewhat unrealistic since she is still a cat after all, though it's made less so by her upbringing. As long as you acknowledge that this stance is considered very strange by other in-game characters, I won't ask for a change, but if you're planning on having her join the Clans her views will have to shift a bit to accommodate that. She can still feel bad that she's taking the life of another animal for her own gain, but it shouldn't stop her from doing so. Let me know if you need anything about this cleared up ^^
Lastly, if I'm nitpicking, her Rank should be None/blank/etc, since she's not in a Clan, but it's really a minor thing and it's fine if you want to leave it as is.
Aside from that, everything is good! The main issue is her birth moon, and feel free to ask me here or in a PM if you need help with that. Once everything is fixed up, let me know and I'll give it another check over c:
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Post by Fox on Aug 7, 2016 11:03:54 GMT
Rank is changed and the moons is changed. Also, for the personality part, she does feel bad for taking another life, but she also understands that she sometimes has to. She would quickly grow out of her sympathy for prey once she gets out in the woods. She will still be sympathetic towards hurt animals in general, but not enough that she wouldn't kill.
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Post by Danielle on Aug 7, 2016 18:40:12 GMT
Looks good! I figured that was the case, just making sure c: Depending on the roleplay, some people like to RP their cats almost as if they're just cat-shaped humans, so I try to make sure people know that it's (a little) more realistic here. This is unusual, but since we're doing a timeline reset after all, her birth moon might have to change again depending on what people want to do regarding this ^^; Feel free to give your opinion too, even though you're a new member! Would you be less confused if we bumped up the timeline to the current IRL time? It would eventually fall out of sync again, but it wouldn't be quite so behind anymore. Considering you've done everything correctly, I will approve her, but her age/birth moon might have to be shifted around a bit more. In that case, would you prefer her age be shifted to 19 moons and birth moon to the Cold Moon 2014 (the original moon you'd put... sorry for all the confusion ;;;)? That seems to be around the age range you want her to be while still keeping the birth moon in December, but let me know if you want something else ^^ In any case, she is considered a full character now and I'll add her to the census and allegiances ^^ If you decide to make a post before it's decided what we'll do, just be aware that the timestamp for the thread might have to change, that's all. Hopefully it's all settled today either way. c:
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Post by Fox on Aug 7, 2016 18:56:30 GMT
Originally that was how I got the 21 moons. I hadn't really read any of the suggestion threads or any of the chat discussions, so I assumed that the IRL time/month was what was in the RP. If her age still needs to be changed I will change it to however the time goes on here.
And thanks! I most likely won't make a post yet with her till everything gets generally sorted out. That, and I would like to decide plots and meetups with other characters before I go making any threads.
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Post by Danielle on Aug 7, 2016 19:15:01 GMT
I wondered if that was the case ^^ I should probably post it somewhere more clearly that the RP time is on a separate timeline than IRL, a few people have gotten confused by that.
Ahh, that's probably a good idea. Maybe I should figure out some plots for my characters sorted out this time rather than just winging it again, aha~
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Post by Fox on Aug 8, 2016 21:00:33 GMT
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